Unit 2 sentence creation assignment

Original #1:

The flowers bloom.

English: The Star Jasmine, Confederate Jasmine...

(Photo credit: Wikipedia)

The sweet scent of the star jasmine flowers that bloom profusely along the red cedar fence beckons the frequently scattered family to step outside eagerly for an impromptu, relaxing afternoon picnic in their welcoming backyard. 

Original #2:

The woman walks

The elderly woman walks briskly up the path leading to a neighborhood park where the sounds of youthful voices rise with anticipation and balls popping into gloves signal the beginning of her grandson’s little league game.

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